bittersweet and reflective. love it.

~* noelle

sardonic, bittersweet and reflective o_O you said i wrote angry, but you write passionately.

oh jeez i can't believe i forgot to come review this. anyway, same old same old gorgeous imagery that jumps out in a very inyourfacemanner to suit the painful haunting yet fithy/gorgeous effect. loved it.

tamakoke

haha yongquan your poems are all pretty and scary can.

I'm afraid I don't quite understand this. I imagine, as I read, a little girl running through and saying and acting out the poem. So first she's satchel swinging(I can only guess) angrily and hears her mother yellin for her so she runs in and asks 'whats up' except she's really angry which is stanzas 3 and 4 and then in 5 she ran to her room. I think. I hope it's something like that, maybe it isn't nearly as literal. Anywho, bye!

Great, and unique, diction.

I am going to read this like 4 times befoe I get the gist, LOL cause I am quite slow at getting the point of even the slightest complexity of a piece.

However, I love the first stanza, its just so angsty, I love it! ^^