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poetic abortion 2005-10-02 . chapter 1
bittersweet and reflective. love it.

~* noelle
really 2005-09-06 . chapter 1
sardonic, bittersweet and reflective o_O you said i wrote angry, but you write passionately.
negligible fictional force 2005-09-05 . chapter 1
oh jeez i can't believe i forgot to come review this. anyway, same old same old gorgeous imagery that jumps out in a very inyourfacemanner to suit the painful haunting yet fithy/gorgeous effect. loved it.
tamakoke 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
tamakoke
reicheru. 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
haha yongquan your poems are all pretty and scary can.
Archipelago 2005-08-14 . chapter 1
I'm afraid I don't quite understand this. I imagine, as I read, a little girl running through and saying and acting out the poem. So first she's satchel swinging(I can only guess) angrily and hears her mother yellin for her so she runs in and asks 'whats up' except she's really angry which is stanzas 3 and 4 and then in 5 she ran to her room. I think. I hope it's something like that, maybe it isn't nearly as literal. Anywho, bye!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-14 . chapter 1
Great, and unique, diction.
Kissless Goodbye 2005-08-14 . chapter 1
I am going to read this like 4 times befoe I get the gist, LOL cause I am quite slow at getting the point of even the slightest complexity of a piece.

However, I love the first stanza, its just so angsty, I love it! ^^
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