You really are awesome. I like this a whole lot, the way you craft your verse is something unique and shows intelligence in the choice of subject matter. I was particularly fond of your last line; it really summed everything up, and didn’t leave anything hanging. I am such a bloody fangirl. Anyway keep writing because I really enjoy your stuff.

This was good, except one thing: I really hope you did not mean GREEK mythological references, beecause, Venus happens to be the Roman rip-off of Aphrodite.