Lovely poem

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Again very good, it has the same fairy tale esque feel to it, but is a gravely real matter. Very smooth and dream like flow, and nice ryhming compisition, even though it does't feel like the ryhmes are being rammed down my throat which is a good thing.

Squirrel r foreverJoseph

WOW. Very powerful, emotive piece. I love the way you break the lines uo, especially with 'For one/more/chance'; high impact writing. Great work.

Heartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.