It's mysterious. Definitely! With a title like that, I guess it's hard not to be ;p

it reminds me of a scene from an mtv I remember when I was quite young. the one where celine dion's singing about something I don't know but the long white drapes/curtains were waving as she chases a memory in a dark night.

I think you should leave it as it is. Maybe you can't finish it because, it's already complete. =/

as usual, the picture you paint with your words is amazingly beautiful. even if it is unfinished, lol.

I LOVE this poem. You have some amazing phrases there -- and you stopped at, in my opinion, just the right moment. Keep it exactly as it is -- very unique and distinctive.

Oksana