Very nice parenthetical element. Gorgeously put, and quite reveiling of something not quite so gorgeous.

oh, so sad, but so good, really captures the feeling... I like your writing! Thanks for the review & the welcome! :) Do you write fanfiction too? That's mostly what I write, I have the same pen name on fanfiction.net as on here... but I'm hoping to put more stuff up on this site too. Thanks for reviewing again! :)

it kinda reminds me of a haiku... a lot said in a few words. there you go. nice!

Wow! That was beautiful!

Powerful piece, with very individual formatting choices that add to the effect. This makes me think of several pictures that I have seen. Your title is also very hard hitting - well done. A poem that can certainly be appreciated.

Beautiful detail and imagry, I really loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.