|Reviews for Aphorism|
| The Legendary Eccentric 8/14/05 . chapter 1
M I like it, as far as I like free-verse poetry, because it uses a concept like the American dream to communicate a seemingly small event such as a break-up as a great tragedy which is more akin to the feelings of your friends.
Do you have any personal reservations against the American dream or is that just a method to emphasise the point.
| Faithless Juliet 8/14/05 . chapter 1
wonderful meaning, I really loved it, keep up the good work.