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Starchild-183 2006-02-02 . chapter 1
Thank you
Kurt Nabokov 2005-08-25 . chapter 1
I'd be afraid to like myself too if I wrote like that.

Sincerely,
InsanoFreakChild 2004-11-05 . chapter 1
wow... that's pretty good. I can relate pretty well to it too.
keep up the good work
Emotionless 2002-05-03 . chapter 1
Thanks for the poem I really really liked it. It was one of those, "Coffee I can idenitify with that" things. Thanx.
Fallen Angel 2001-07-09 . chapter 1
I look at you words and i wonder, how much would one give.... to be one in the crowd, i can read your poems and think that youre right i dont want to be normal one in the crow but if i got the choise. The choise to loose my ability to reflect on life to live a normal life with little loss with little sorrows would i say no? I dont know, but what i do know is that in a world of despair, your words is of comfort to me. You shine like a star in a world of darknes. An anker to reality that can make you forget your selfpity in the feeling that your not alone. Somewhere there are people who are like you. I thank you for that.
Katherin 2001-07-05 . chapter 1
that stung! i know that fealing...my parents got me ´happypills´for it...as if that helps..:(
(ps. great poem)
liyen 2001-05-03 . chapter 1
This is sad poem.However I like it.
ashkickerchic 2001-04-30 . chapter 1
ah alas another realistic poem from u. mind u i am reading from the bottom up. i like the way u write.
Heir of Darkness 2001-04-16 . chapter 1
Sniff. That's me. Mh. Soemone once said : One of the key to happiness is a bad memory. How true. Sigh. All your self-hatred directed on others ...
Yuri Rai 2001-03-06 . chapter 1
*sighs* why am i finding all these poems that somehow describe how I feel... although it's not who i am...
Fireheart 2001-02-02 . chapter 1
that's not pathetic...it's just there...truth. That was a great poem tho..it pretty much sums a lot of my life up. I can't put the rest into words...never was really good at that. ~Fireheart in fire's shadow
Solthar Rygelsun 2001-02-02 . chapter 1
You're depression seems to be based on fear - Yet, what is fear? when is fear? why is fear? Fear is the feeling of agitation and/or anxiety caused by the presence of something that might happen in the _future_ . Think - when is fear in the present? It's always "I -Might- fall down" or "I'll make a fool of myself". So, if you keep your mind in the present you wont face fear quite soften.
Indig0 2001-02-02 . chapter 1
good
GeniHout 2001-02-02 . chapter 1
wow.. how.. depressing.. I know a couple of girls at school with me that feel this way sometimes.. you've summed up depression very well.. Tonga
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