True to life in a beautiful--but resentful way. It's very hard to keep up with people.

With all due respect,

Faerie Energy

This is so awesome! I can just picture it all... It's amazing and beautiful what kind of mental images you've just given me. Great work, as usual!

P.S. It's AnathemaCeres, this is my new screenname.

o-o Wow is all i can say, i had to read it a couple of times because this piece really struck me. Its a very beautiful and poetic, *adds 2 favorites*

wah~~ imagery is so vivid~~ kind of creepy in some ways too~~ br... which is real?? Wodenrful job!

keep writing!

^^ hm... i'm going to quote shakespeare. "god has given you one face, yet you put on another." ^^ heh. delightful read. enjoyable to the last word. very avant garde prose. expecting nothing less and finding just that.

kakyou

Cool poem nice imagery though i agree the sadness anger bit is overdone. I like this though concentrating my mind on imagining this was fun.

interesting... Im not sure i like the list of emotions... it breaks up the flow, but i love the repition

Oh that is so cool. I like how you end with that good question!

OMG! Yea! I luv that music video! And the lead singer is so HOT!! (; also your poem is cool too. i like it' s veiws on society and all that jazz. (did you see the movie chicago? u should) and all that jazz. ^_^ WRITE ON!!(=

Interesting...I can't honestly say I understood this entirely, though to an extent I feel I can identify with the concept of different identities. Even though I don't think I grasped it as well as I'd have liked to, I enjoyed it very much. =)

I will give my best critique but I am brainless, so my advice may not be needed (I really should be asleep...). *coughs* alright, honest opinion: your struggle was not in vane. you portrayed the emotions and scene well and brought the point out nicely. I think this is great the way it is but I have mixed feelings for the fifth stanza ("Sadnes, Anger, etc..."). I think you could have done something a bit more fresher but I think you did your best and it came out splendid either way. I certainly am not dissapointed. :) well done, Sumi-chan. keep up the marvelous work!

[btw, spelling mistakes are due to no sleep. 4:49 a.m and this one has yet to hit the hay.]

~* noelle