Here's my one word review: Deep!

I'll have to say I **really** like this one. Your description of the soldier's plight is so defined, and so tangible, that it envokes a strong emotional reaction upon the reader.

Keep up the Good work.

i like the first four lines.. the rest im not so sure about. theres some funky rhyming pattern in there, and, although its original and all, it doesn't seem to flow when read aloud. still, it's a pretty good poem, if not up to the same standard as the rest of your work.

it's nice, even though it's depresing. haha

Well done! Great poem; keep it up!

~Anna~

dass relli sad...not as in depressing..like makes me feel gloomy..dass a good thing by the way..u can move ppl with ure words..=] u noe, it seems uve put ure heart into ure work ^^. hav u eva felt dis way ? i tink lotsa ppl hav and can relate to "wot is there to celebrate?" =)

Powerful. You tell it like it is. It's sad, this world.