Reviews for Angelus Errare - FictionPress.com

wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-09-07 ch 1,	abuseyou're so wise. really. this drips with wisdom.
Sharakinpaix 2005-08-16 ch 1,	abuseYour first stanza was amazing--again! It's amazing how you only used six words, "The streamers of damp morning light," to capture the moisture and movement of the setting. Come to think of it, if you know a flash animation artist, you could ask them to pick any one of your poems and animate it. That's how vivid your poems are! This time, I was a bit lost as to who "He" is, who rides on warheads, and "She," who puts anger in the masses. A Biblical or political allusion I'm not aware of, probably; sorry about that! I'm really curious as to who they are though. Please tell me in your next review! The personna seems like someone whose faith has suffered. He/she must be an observer of the loss of individuality in the second-to-last stanza, where you use "masses" and "simple" but never people. Amazing word choice. Keep up the good work!
i was a postcard 2005-08-16 ch 1,	abuseI love how everything you write has a certain rhythm, a type of...ebb and flow. "Where walk thou angels?" and "Where did you lose your way?" wonderful.