This is so beautiful oh if only there was no death. Only one has the power to bring back life and to do away with death. Man is he awesome!

Love it Helen

This is awesome... I haven't had the chance to get on in a while and to come back and find this poem was great... It is very well written.. Thank You

Yeah, I like it too. It has that nice 'ring' to it... In fact it reminds me of that R.E.M song... Let me see, "This goes out to the one I love"... Yeah, I totally get it, good job!

this was a wonderful poem. I love the subject. and the flow was wonderful. Welcome back to the writing world. Haven't read much from you lately either. Hope to read more soon! Take care

very expressive and intense. just keep on wishing and he'll be there. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

Lovely; you have a gracefullness in this, your not demanding or pleading that they come back, your just waiting, and expecting. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.