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Reviews For: Six Stars at Twilight

lilk
2005-12-08
ch 1,
any were in this does the boy die?
WR
2005-09-27
ch 1,
I often wonder why one writes. Do we relish our past or savour our future? Fantasy or reality we have not yet experienced? Are the characters really just a product of our imaginations or a reflection of those we have met along the path?Enjoyed your introduction and would like to know more.
Emokabob
2005-08-15
ch 1,
Awesome. Awesome to the max!
The Facelessman
2005-08-15
ch 1,
A very interesting beginning. I say this because all the characters seem to be other than humans besides Cadet Hale. But, I really like sci-fi stories. I think if you follow up correctly you should be able to make this a great story. But, sci-fi stories require great responsibility so it just depends on how much time you are willing to spend on this story. But, i think you will be able to turn this into a great story.keep writing and i will keep reviewing.
softlycryingrain
2005-08-15
ch 1,
Interesting, I hope I can keep all these characters straight! anyway, good start, but it seemed kind of odd for them to watch that little clip about when James and Kayan met, even though it was cute. It just seems like a strange thing for these military type people to have on file, let alone watch, lol. But besides that, I like it and look forward to more!
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