You need to teach me the pretty line things. This is beautiful but it makes the song start playing in my brain.

oh, and you said "My last Words" was dark. This is scary, iz! loving the whole "based on a hymn" thing tho. I've got another version. "This guy drops his wrench in the long grass and can't find it. His faitful dog, mace, eats all the grass and the guy finds his wrench. He's so happy he bursts out singing: 'Amazing Mace, how sweet the hound, that saved a wrench for me!'"A bit long for a review, but fun!

Love it, sweetie. Very meaningful. Weaver x

Powerful and passionate, I liked it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.