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| Whistling Gypsy 2005-08-16 ch 1,   | I like it, especially the chorus. The chorus rocks. I love it. Like, totally love it. |
| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2005-08-15 ch 1, | i like your lyrics, but i'm not a huge fan of rhyming. when i write with rhymes, my work comes out sounding too forced. i like the emotion in this though. and i absolutely love the line, "So I dedicate this insomnia to you." Awesome work! |
| IgnitedIcicle 2005-08-15 ch 1, | goddamn, boy. your end note took longer to read than the piece itself! gr :D do i make you randy baby, do i, do i? that's Austin Powers talkin' not me. okay then, i liked the poem and it made me feel guilty just because i read it! ha ha so hm direct would be like whoa. email it to whoever you should. do it, i dare you, double, triple, double DOG even... i could go all nite. uh, huh-huh, i see what i just said. settle down beavis, and take a fine nap! |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-08-15 ch 1, | Deep, and well-detailed. I liked it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |