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| Ysabrylla Noakes 2006-07-07 ch 9,  | abuseHey! This is coming along great! I'm really excited to see how they're all going to intertwine together! Good luck! There are some spelling & grammar mistakes however that could use to be fixed but other than that it's very good! :) |
| Hymne a l'Amour 2005-12-14 ch 6, | abuseI really like this! Keep the chapters coming!! |
| Mlkjug 2005-09-08 ch 5, | abuseBut is 'Lauren' supposed to be me? If so, I really think I should be singing phantom music... perhaps 'Think of Me...' just an idea... :)*grins super huge* |
| Mlkjug 2005-09-06 ch 5, anon. | abuseIt almost fits me perfectly... ALMOST. I so do not like Ben! Nor will he ever be old enough to be our teacher while we're still in school! :) You wish... |
| NorthPinkWitch 2005-09-06 ch 6, | abuseOnce again, I love it. Ren for some reason reminds me a bit of my friend Ang...hm *ponders* Oh well! Great chapter, update soon! |
| L.M.A. 2005-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseLol. How many of these characters remind me of some of your friends? I'm not even gonna say. There are those important differences though. Keep writing! L.M.A. |
| OTHERfantasyfreak 2005-08-25 ch 5, | abuseHeehee! This is cute!^^ |
| OTHERfantasyfreak 2005-08-19 ch 4, | abusewow, sorry i haven't talked to you in awhile. This is cool, I like how everyone so far has a different personality...I don't know where this is going, but i'm liking it so far. Keep up the excellent work!^^ |
| NorthPinkWitch 2005-08-17 ch 4, | abuseNice chapter. I like Bonnie so far, though I don't know why...Keep up the good work! ~Emy~ |
| soccerfreak2516 2005-08-17 ch 4, | abuseGuess who was able to read this finally! Would have reviewed the other chapters earlier, but I've been busy ...as usual ...sigh... nice job so far. This is really interesting. There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes that I've seen, and the chapters are kinda short, but aside from that, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more! -soccerfreak2516 |
| fishouttawater 2005-08-16 ch 3, | abuseInteresting idea, the title really caught my attention. It would be nice if your chapters were a little longer, but I guess that if shorter chapters means you are able to update more often, it doesn't make much of a difference. Great job so far! fishouttawater |
| NorthPinkWitch 2005-08-16 ch 3, | abuseCool story so far...the introduction caught me. Now I wanna know what's going on. It reminded me of a song. I'll e-mail you the lyrics if you like. Update soon! ~Emmy~ |
| Archipelago 2005-08-15 ch 2, | abuseHeya I think this is a wonderful idea for a story. This chapter is wonderful, I like short chapters. And this one was simply, concise, and interesting. Great job. |
| TurtleGoddess 2005-08-15 ch 2, | abuseInteresting plot idea you have here, although I'd really like to see longer chapters. The characters are realistic, but I think that it would be easier to familiarize with them if you had more description. Nevertheless, this is a good story so far, so please continue! |