You express the torment of the mind so well. All of the inner demons that rip and shred us apart, lying to our faces as we hear more lies filling our heads.Simply amazing...

Stunning! And powerful! And... wow, that was great. I wish I could write moving stuff like this. You put my poetry skills to shame, girl, to shame. It sounds so true, once you've figured out it's the devil speaking in bold. What a wonderful poem; I love it so!

Cheers!Piombi Pozzi.

Wonderful as always. I lvoe the way you usd the different fonts, truly amazing.

Keep it up.

Powerful, as always. Your writing is so distinct. I don't think you could be ordinary if you tried.

my goodness, wow. you amaze me.

Wow. I'm shocked. This is the best I've read from you. You've topped them all. O m y G o d. I am stunned. It was amazing. Pure genius, this one, I love it! l!o!v!e! it! How can I criticize this? It spoke to me on so many levels, and held such magnetism, fire, scintillating, liquid richness, fierce and throbbing, o m y G o d.

:He’s just too beautiful for you. Too. Beautiful.- too goshdarn beautiful.

i love the second to last stanza, reminds me of beaches and bubbles. and hell to spite!

hm, i cant say much about the bible part, because i dont read the bible, or know how to find things in it.who really wrote the bible, sometimes to wonder.

fingernails, your other poem on the bella-anima haiku's had fingernails in it.

tingle. tingle.

wonderful

That's the most powerful thing I've read in a while. Wow. Just...wow. Angry, angry, stunning.

Keep writing! ~ Jen

Hmm...Not realy sure what to make of it, but very good.