I can definately relate to this piece, it really is one of the most heart renching things you can experience. Though its quite short it tells everything that needs to be said. It's so raw and pure, really great. adding to favorites.

Well said. Well done.

Very passionate and emotive... so poetic and beautiful. Love the wistful tone... good job.

-ShadowNemesis

Wow...I've felt this one time. All the boys i end up liking...like my best friend! so it's really hard to like someone. But yeah great poem!! I can relate.

I can understand that feeling. Fantastic wording and form. Two thumbs up,there. (Thank you for your review.)

-B.R.R

so profound. and so true.

this is so true... so true...

short, but well structured and well written. i congradulate you on a fine piece of poetry. :D

A wonderful, though somewhat sad, poem. It portrays longing and desire, yet melancholy with the knowledge that the love is never to be. Again, wonderful.

aw~ so nice.. very very well written.. i like i like..!! ^_^

Aw. Another good one. Kinda sad in my opinion but it's great! Keep it up.

Good show of emotion. It almost made me cry. It is painful to watch someone from a far...I kind of know how that is even though I did end up with him anyway. I read all of your poems, and they're all good. they all show emotion. If you are watching someone from a far, just go for it. It works.

thank you for the review.

i know the feeling all too well, very good job!!

That's so sad. One of those poems that is just really sad with no other words to describe it. I'm so bad at reviews at night...

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

you gave me goosebumps great job!! all the emotion and all the drama was great!

Ah, the harsh reality of rejection...i reckon u should jsut tell her...girls LOVE guys who write poetry...so yer...goodluck mate, R&R me sumtime ^_^