I wish I hadn't waited so long to tell you how I felt. It could have saved us both from being so lonely.

This poem is really good. I guess I have horrible timing huh?

love,Mister

beautiful, heratfelt and just amazing! The fluctuations of your feelings before both (maybe just strong ones for one of them) is very well portarayed in the use of words and the rythm. Very well done

This poem is amazing, its very bittersweet and beautiful. I hope the person in the story has everything worked out soon. I like the flow of this poem. Very good.

Heart rending subject matter. Such a terrible situation to be in.

The rhythem is fantastic. It has a regular pattern with breaks that accentuate the important lines. Not sure if you did this on purpose but it's a nice touch.

Powerful and passionate, I loved the detail and imagry. The emotion was lovely, keep up the good love,Juliet.