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| newfoundhope 2007-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseHow very true. :] I'm adding this to my favorites. |
| K. T. Marie 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseYes, YES YES THAT'S IT. I am so taping that to my religion and then to my science notebooks. do ya mind? (i'll credit, of course) |
| Nemonus 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseAh! Very..deep...in 14 words!! Like a motto...ancient/modern. |
| Michelle Munoz 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseSo true. ~Sao |
| McQuinn 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very articulate way to describe what many believe. Great job. -McQuinn |
| J.M. May 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNice! I don't think I've ever heard it put that way, but what a short and succint way of getting to the point! |
| NinjaStoryteller 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI just now noticed that this shared a title with your story. Was this going to be the theme through it? This sounds like the type of line from great thinkers that you quote so often. Using senyru-haiku format worked well, it's hard to do justice to meaningful words like these with a longer poem. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh so very true, but we don't have to believe in that... EB |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseBravo on the obvious *smile*. I liked this... quick and to the point. |
| temblance 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseJust looking at your stuff and your profile shows that you seem to be a person who really thinks deeply when writing. i loved this. For the most part, I can't gather much meaning from haikus just because they are so short, but this one really sums the whole religion/science thing up nicely...it's amazing how you got it to fit into the 5-7-5 pattern. All in all, that was really well done. |
| Doray 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. You did a good job putting those pieces of truth in such a few words. |
| The Muffin Cake 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseso so true. *applauds Tricky T's great wisdom* |
| Cloud Burst 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abusemmhmm. im in total agreement with ur haiku. |
| Luthiena o Lorien 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseYes, it describes what philosophers think, but I must disagree! :)Also, religion also does state HOW God created the world... But I shall not give lectures here! :) |
| whyette-h 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYay! I really liked this poem! It was great how you managed to come up with the lines without reverting to broken sentences and whatnot. I also liked the subject and what you're saying here! Good Work! Keep it up! -Whyette |