Amazing... the imagery is peircing. I love it.

Wow... this was incredibly original.

"I carry conversations with your ghost"

Absolutely wonderful!

I would like to see a little more form, however, and a tinge of more flow, if you know what I mean.

Very good! It's going on my favorites list, as are you!

-Whyette

this all paints a pretty picture

Wow - I had this really eerie feeling when I read this! I had to reread it. I love your way with words! Very effective, and truly amazing. -

You can review yourself? That is too odd...

am i crazy for getting teary over this? well its great writing anyway.