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This was so cute! I loved it (:

This was so adorable! That sly dog indeed!

Funny and cute! Made me smile. Now my long and complicated review is over.

I love stories that have next to no dialogue - huge junkie for narration - and this story really does a masterful job of that! We still know what's happening with endless pages of speech. Beautifully written and literally had me wanting to hug my screen at the end. Excellent.

yes. very romantic concept and cheesy lines - i love it. can i take this story and marry it and make sweet, sweet run on sentences with it and maybe our lovechild would be half as good as this? kthx

Hey there! I'm Rosie from a website called A Drop of Romeo and I'm happy to say that your story has been added to our archive, under the category of One Shot! Here's your review:

Rosie Thinks: 'Sly Dog' is up there with my favourite one-shots on fictionpress. Honestly, I was surprised that it wasn't already on the site and so eagerly snatched up the opportunity to rectify that! The whole thing flows so beautifully, from beginning to end, so I barely noticed the passing in time as they went from strangers to more. The love interest is very much a stray dog - slowly taking over our MC's apartment and life. I couldn't help but fall in love with him a little bit - his actions were just so hilarious and goofy.

The story is very much description heavy, with very little dialogue, but this is definitely not a bad thing. It makes this story even more unique for me, giving it a much different feel. It's cute, romantic and the ending is just so utterly adorable I couldn't help but 'aw' aloud. It was just so fluffy, but it didn't make me feel sick from all the happy/romantic feelings - a perfect balance! The sentences are all generally quite long and do run-on, but this added to the overall feel of the story. I actually think it helped the flow of it and gave the reader the feel of really being inside the MC's mind. The author, at the end, makes a note that she thinks there are some awkward sentences in there. If you haven't noticed, I don't agree with this at all. There were no jolting sentences and no mistakes, as far as I could tell. Overall, this is definitely a one-shot great and deserves its almost 300 reviews.

You...quickly jammed this and pulled it off?! How is that possible! It's way too great a read to believe you "quickly jammed" this! xD So unfair. I'm jealous of your writing style; it pulls in the reader right away. Never mind the long, run-on sentences. I think it was all fine and the story flowed well.

That said, I like the ending. It was very sweet and well, totally unexpected. Thank you for the great read!

I love this one shot 3

This is just so adorable. Brings a smile to my face every time I read it. :)

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That's how this story made me feel.

This was cute!

Awww! I love it! The writting style's cute, as was the plot. Hehe. Adorable.

They have such a cute relationship! :3 He seems so carefree!

As you said, goofy and gushy, a wonderful thing to read!