through the run ons, It is a beautiful story! I LOVE the ending!

It was different yet a good cliche. I like it...keep it up.

aww. that's so sweet. made me feel nice and fuzzy while reading it. great job

Lol, I wish I had that kind of relationship

This is the sweetest one shot I've ever read! It's so cute and sweet! You know, the one that would give you a warm and fuzzy feeling inside? You're awesome! Write more!

Lian

Cute and sweet. No spelling mistakes as far as I'm concerned, as well. Great job.

This is so CUTE! Love it!

wha, so nice! i want a guy like that, too! :D

BRILLIANT I LOVE THE STYLE OF WRITING :-D

This is a gorgeous story. I loved reading it and I loved the goofy, enthusiastic, slightly awkward male character. He is so adorable. I would love it if you did a sequel.

aw

that was hilariously goofy!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

is your name by any chance elaine?

mine is too D i always get told "oh! that's my aunt's/grandmother's name!"

and i'm like yay... i always wanted to have an old woman name... :S

hahahahah

GREAT STORY

That was cute in a funny way. ] I really like how you never named the characters, but I felt as if I knew them anyway. I thought that was really clever. I was afraid I'd forgotten their names before remembering that they were never mention. ;)

You mentioned how there were a few run-ons... I didn't find any. ] And I keep an eye out for these things. ;)

That was such a sweet oneshot. One of the best.

What a perfect one-shot.

Love the creative ending.

Didn't expect leaving the door open to be so impt. XD

aw that was so cute :) I like it. Nice job.