That is one of the sweetest short story I have ever read. Left me grinning from ear to ear. Thank you for turning this horrible day around. You made my day )

Gorgeous.

woah this is helluva awesome story. I wish I could write like this. :)

Very cute. But I have to say that I would totally report to the cops if the same thing happened to me. Haha. xD

Aw, that was adorable! Too cute! And good use of words and descriptions and stuff. I like it!

omg. omg. that was the cutest thing i have ever read in my entire life.

i love it!

This is so incredibly sweet! I love it! Your writing style is really engaging, and I love how you flesh out your characters... nice!

Erisah

hahah. i really like your story :)

This is such a good short story! i love the little quirks.

Utterly romantic - I adored it.

So I finally grabbed a free moment to read one of your stories girl, and I must say:

Aw. That was completely cute. Even from a guys point of view, it's sweet.

I really like that the girl point of view wasn't forced upon the reader in a sickeningly overdone way that kills it, but rather, is introduced as a semi-third person mix of words that hint towards what she's feeling. It had me from the first couple of paragraphs all the way until the last, and I must say, it's rather exceptional.

It might just be my tired state of mind, but I couldn't see any awkward sentences at all. Keep up the good work, L.

aw, it's precious. What a sweetheart he is!

that was so cute! i think that you can SO make a longer story for this and it'd be a hit. a man is slowly making worming his way into a girl's heart... and she doesn't even know it.

Wow, that was amazing. It was so sweet. The ending was really otiginal. I was practically hopping on my chair when the guy said, "Took you long enough."

I really like this story because the characters are real, you know. They're not super rich or super good-looking. They're just ordinary people, and that makes it easier to relate to them.

I want someone like him. When you look at him for the first time, you'd think he's just an average guy, but you never know... Once again, your story was amazing.

Aw, that was sweet! I feel so fuzzy and warm inside...A great one shot. Well written!