|Reviews for Sly Dog|
| Lisa 6/22/07 . chapter 1
That is one of the sweetest short story I have ever read. Left me grinning from ear to ear. Thank you for turning this horrible day around. You made my day )
| brittle hearts 6/20/07 . chapter 1
| angelbymistake 6/20/07 . chapter 1
woah this is helluva awesome story. I wish I could write like this. :)
| DJWL 6/15/07 . chapter 1
Very cute. But I have to say that I would totally report to the cops if the same thing happened to me. Haha. xD
| Kyllex 6/14/07 . chapter 1
Aw, that was adorable! Too cute! And good use of words and descriptions and stuff. I like it!
| d 6/11/07 . chapter 1
omg. omg. that was the cutest thing i have ever read in my entire life.
i love it!
| Erisah Mae 6/8/07 . chapter 1
This is so incredibly sweet! I love it! Your writing style is really engaging, and I love how you flesh out your characters... nice!
| cowow 5/31/07 . chapter 1
hahah. i really like your story :)
| sunnydaysmiles 5/29/07 . chapter 1
This is such a good short story! i love the little quirks.
| Professional scatterbrain 5/28/07 . chapter 1
Utterly romantic - I adored it.
| Tornado-kun 5/28/07 . chapter 1
So I finally grabbed a free moment to read one of your stories girl, and I must say:
Aw. That was completely cute. Even from a guys point of view, it's sweet.
I really like that the girl point of view wasn't forced upon the reader in a sickeningly overdone way that kills it, but rather, is introduced as a semi-third person mix of words that hint towards what she's feeling. It had me from the first couple of paragraphs all the way until the last, and I must say, it's rather exceptional.
It might just be my tired state of mind, but I couldn't see any awkward sentences at all. Keep up the good work, L.
| the rocket apple 5/28/07 . chapter 1
aw, it's precious. What a sweetheart he is!
| xxhiddenkittenxx 5/27/07 . chapter 1
that was so cute! i think that you can SO make a longer story for this and it'd be a hit. a man is slowly making worming his way into a girl's heart... and she doesn't even know it.
| LaraineGlass 5/23/07 . chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing. It was so sweet. The ending was really otiginal. I was practically hopping on my chair when the guy said, "Took you long enough."
I really like this story because the characters are real, you know. They're not super rich or super good-looking. They're just ordinary people, and that makes it easier to relate to them.
I want someone like him. When you look at him for the first time, you'd think he's just an average guy, but you never know... Once again, your story was amazing.
| white-clouds 5/22/07 . chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet! I feel so fuzzy and warm inside...A great one shot. Well written!