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| Hopeful Light 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThere are times when I wish that that one golden moment lasted all the time. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abusePowerful. I felt calm reading it, aserene and graceful read. |
| Archipelago 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, I really love this one I can see it perfectlty. I remeber a day just like you described and it was so beautiful I wrote a 10 word poem(then i lost it). The only thing though is that the last two lines don't seem to macth the rest of the poem too much, kinda rushed. Great job. |