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Reviews For: One Golden Moment

Hopeful Light
2005-08-21
ch 1,
abuseThere are times when I wish that that one golden moment lasted all the time.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-08-17
ch 1,
abusePowerful. I felt calm reading it, aserene and graceful read.
Archipelago
2005-08-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, I really love this one I can see it perfectlty. I remeber a day just like you described and it was so beautiful I wrote a 10 word poem(then i lost it). The only thing though is that the last two lines don't seem to macth the rest of the poem too much, kinda rushed. Great job.
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