Wow, very descriptive and nice. _

This one does not seem to match your writing style, but still a good poem.

Great imagery and diction!

You did a good job with the adjitives, but I did not like this poem as much. (no rhymeing)

Oh, very descriptive. I can see each image vividly. The last lines are just perfect. Although, in line 33 from the bottom tickly is supposed to be tickle i think. And as the other reviewer asked: how'd the contest go? I think ya did a wonderful job.

this is good stuff. how'd you do in the contest? I like how the rain is referred to as a army of gray and silver. *sighs* i like the rain...