|Reviews for Rainstorm|
| sarah1491 1/30/06 . chapter 1
Wow, very descriptive and nice. _
| Master Bates 12/15/05 . chapter 1
This one does not seem to match your writing style, but still a good poem.
| Ceri.17 11/16/05 . chapter 1
Great imagery and diction!
| Jeremy Kerley 10/5/05 . chapter 1
You did a good job with the adjitives, but I did not like this poem as much. (no rhymeing)
| Archipelago 8/16/05 . chapter 1
Oh, very descriptive. I can see each image vividly. The last lines are just perfect. Although, in line 33 from the bottom tickly is supposed to be tickle i think. And as the other reviewer asked: how'd the contest go? I think ya did a wonderful job.
| Aryanda 8/16/05 . chapter 1
this is good stuff. how'd you do in the contest? I like how the rain is referred to as a army of gray and silver. *sighs* i like the rain...