|Reviews for Hermia's Solilaquey|
| suckerplucker 8/16/05 . chapter 1
you have a great logic in this piece (called a soliloquy. you also need to check your spelling of remorse and a few other words.) My issue with it however is that in trying to write in shakespearean english, especially in the first few scentences, you slip into writing yoda. For instance "marry I must" etc. This is unnatural and not correct shakespearean writing.
but hey you have a pretty good grip on hermia, and midsummer is my favorite shakespeare so i really respect that.