The ending's a little strange, but the poem as a whole was very good. I would normally be tempted to make a comment about the rhyming, but somehow it works here. Especially like the conversational appearance.

Matt

Steph i thought i had already reviewed this but i guess i didnt great job you make me and my poetry feel stupid.(yes my poetry has feelings)lol

Sophia Marie True child of the Xenu\ and ConstanceGraces lintball twin.

LOL to the authors note. On a serious tone, this is REALLY heartfelt. Wonderful. I hope the "bastard" did die! :D.