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| Mary's.Song 2008-02-15 ch 1,  | abuseWow! This great! I can never really find any good songs on here but that was definitely amazing! |
| NathanStamper 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abusei like it a lot |
| Stewart MacDonald 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseHeh, loved it. Very punk, and very nice lyrics at the same time. Very relatable concept to grasp as well. I liked how it was written, and thoroughlly enjoyed a lot of the verses. Probably something I'd listen to. Well, something I'd listen to with no swearing. (That'd be the day.) Being a fan of Sum 41, I enjoy this style of song. Great job! -Stewart MacDonald |
| jojoba-music-girl 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, this one really..well..I'm trying to find the words to express how amazing this piece of work is, but I can't find them really...The only thing I can think of right now is: bravo bravo! Wish I wrote this, then I could be proud of myself, something I think you must be! [jojoba-music-girl] |
| Purpley-Pen 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abusei like it! good job i see a lot of potential in this song |
| TylerB 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abusestick it to the man! |
| blackr0se64 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot. Your rythm seemed to get off when you switched to 4 line stanzas. I think your 6 lines stanzas were the most effective. |
| gatito maniaco 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI love it. ice rhythm and brilliant message. Its a kickass song too. never stop writing, -gatito |
| dead rose closet monster 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuseyou've really got a lot to say. that's pretty cool. i always find opinionated people to be cooler than most. at least they've got their own minds. this is neat |
| arc arsenal 2004-03-06 ch 1, | abusedude, mad song. totally hits the left-wing nail on the head, and its well written aswell. very very nice |
| steve 2004-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. i can really see that you hate the man. cool rhythm, too. it'll be sweet with some heavy metal sadistic kind of rock in it. do you have a band? |
| Saint David 2003-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI agree with a previous reviewer - needs a fun bassline. And a small mob of people to yell it back. Damn good song. |
| Oi Cunt 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abuseYou got a good head on your shoulders and you speak what ya **' feel. Not too many people can do that. ;) |
| Frodo 2003-06-12 ch 1, | abuseIt's is a really well written song. Intresting point you're trying to get across. You write really good in depth songs. Awesome work. -Frodo |
| Bitter Thursday 2003-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is AMAZING! If you have a band, or know someone with one, GIVE THEM THE LYRICS! I could hear it in my head as I read and this would make an awesome song. =) Alli |