With the interesting summary and an even more interesting prologue, you've managed to catch my attention quite well. Well done. And so far, the mystery and anticipation will drive me to the next chapter. Well done again!

thank you for the reviews... it was very nice of you and both of stories you read i wil be no longer updating on.. sorry..and as for this story... im assuming this is like a prologue and the next chapter will go into what Dr. Intelligent did--like a story and then every few chapters it would be back at the present of Dr. Intelligents trial... that would be good... This chapter is good.. it has a lot of description and its a little eerie but you have got to make it longer... think as if you were going to get this published.. it would be half a page when it should be at least two.. I would work on adding a little bit more but besides that its very good