so wat are u tryna say that raps not good ?
theres rappers that speak wisdom that came from the hood
mayb ur pickin the wrong radio station
or just reiterating the sanctations
that rap has no logic that u always here the same sh*t

Hahaha. :P

I completely agree. :P

I got a laugh out of this, but I do agree with Silent Knight. I'm not a huge fan of rap (especially not the stuff you're writing about, the commerical stuff), but I do think it's important to consider that there are some really great, thought-provoking rap songs out there. Still, clever acronym.

Ooh! I loved that =D It was very funny, I laughed, and heh ^_^; Im not supposed to be on here in class =P

Well! One mistake Their words spread around the world like a decease

I think you meant to write O_o disease? no? If not, sorry, it sounded a little awkward to me! But either way, I truely loved it, I think Im going to share this poem around, due to the fact I feel the same way about rap -_- Oh! Great... abbreviation ^_~

This poem was pretty good. that is all they sing about is the stuff that you wrote about in your poem.Your friend Robert West.

err...so you're saying that rap revolves solely around violence, sex, drugs, and the ghetto? which is totally wrong on several different levels...Sage Francis, Common, and Atmosphere are perfect examples of this.

you're saying that all rap is easy and effortless? once again wrong. maybe when it comes to making commercialized garbage it is, but when it comes to making actual rap music it's a different story.

before you start jumping to conclusions about rap I suggest you start doing your research.

HAHA! That was hilarious, I loved the rhythm and rhyming. Very interesting view on rappers.

~happy writing~

Hahahahaha! Oh my gosh!! That was hillarious! I so totally agree with you 100 percent. I HATE rap. It is just so stupid. And the people who "sing" it sound like they have something stuck up their nose or somethin. You really did a great job with this. You continue to amaze me with your easy flow of rhyming. Hahaha, I'm still laughing about this. It is just too funny. Good work!! YAY! I wish I could say which line I liked the best, but I liked them all!! OK. Until your next poem then...

Hahahah! Very, very true. I like the creativeness with the title as well. (And I have to wonder? Where did they get "rap?") This is cool! (And it rhymes! Yay!)

TBF

Hey Jeremy,

I told you I would review.

This is a great poem. I especially like the part about how they make a 10 million dollar record. That was funny. Good job!! Keep up the excellent work!!

Hey Jeremy! *waves* Look who's back on FP! :)

I really liked this - I agree 100% with what you said and the irony of it is the second I started reading this a really ughy rap song just came on the radio...lol

Oh so true, and i complimet you for saying it. Not only does this agree with me (which I like :P) but its good. Very good. Vera, vera good. Vera good in da hood. *starts to rap*

Seriously though, excellent piece.

THat was true,But respect them not as people but for theyer talent in putting thing together and getting them done.

Damon (jeffery)