 EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 2005-09-11 . chapter 1I had this "question" in my head. I Checked my Bookmarks. Your profile was on there... I don't consciously remember putting you there, yet I vaguely do know I was exhausted last night. You must've been the last thing I saw, and I saved it for later, dropped into a deep sleep. So now, I read your profile (alone) and I'm amazed at what I read. If not as an actual person, you, as an author, should answer many unasked questions I seek to hear. If you should write again, remember that. And try to write without reading my recent posts.
This could be interesting. I believe in connection. But I live alone.
I enjoy your style. Don't mean to creep you out. It's just an inborn talent. LoL :) |
 tranCendenZ 2005-09-08 . chapter 1First of all, thanks for the lovely review. It helps to know that the pain is worth it.
Second, the last poem on there is really really good. I like the other two as well, but that last one just got to me.
"A smile wide and 4 years deep." That's one of the most original lines of any poem I've read in a while.
I also like the "But tripped upon a cloud somewhereAnd dwindled, lost between two lands" line in the second poem. Just very creative and original all around.
Kudos. |