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| Strangely Natural 2007-09-28 ch 7,  | abuseOver all this was pretty great, just about the small but defining moments in one's life. I liked it a lot. |
| Shadow Kitten 6767 2007-07-25 ch 7, | abuseWow. That was kinda... Quick. o.o |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2006-11-06 ch 7, | abuse-sweat drops- Hey, not sure if I already sent you a review for this chapter, but I'm going to just in case. xD Anyway, I liked this chapyer, though the epilouge was really really short. Heh. But that's okay. I SUCK at epliouges and proluges...not sure if that's how you spell it but whatever. Anyway, nive ending and as for the title, try: First Time For Everything It'd be really cool since that was your last line in the story. =) |
| Out-Spoken-Runaway 2006-05-24 ch 6, | abuseHaha. NATHANIEL IS SHY! xD Pfft, if 'the one' actually existed, I'd think Jason was the 'the one' for her. Eh...cool story, keep writing. IceCold13 |
| authordream4life 2006-05-18 ch 6, | abusethis is so good-tastic! Please keep going! I like it a lot! -Sa x33 |
| rider on the storm 2006-02-13 ch 6, | abusefinish it!! i love nathaniel. lmao, well obviously not LOVE but you know... find it in your heart to finish! lmao. |
| mrs.scarlet101.5 2006-01-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseyou really need to make another chapter, this story is so good! poor Mandy! |
| crazylady4 2006-01-24 ch 6, | abuseMan i love it he is so cute. I have to say i don't like Mandy but like she's needed. |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2006-01-22 ch 6, | abuseCan'rt wait for more! |
| Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abusePoor Andie. I'm not a tomboy and I love dances, but when I don't want to go and my friends do...not fun. The text is a little squashed together, but that's my only complaint. Great so far! |
| diSasteRangL 2005-12-29 ch 5, | abusethis chapter's much better. =) just try to apply what i suggested to everything they do. in this chapter, you could've let them get to know each other a little better while they were shopping... talk about the food as they're looking for what to buy, share personal stories, i don't know. haha.. but i like the pizza part. they sounded like they were having fun kneading the dough, lol. |
| ATH-dreams 2005-12-24 ch 5, | abuseDarn this was good and it stoped in the middle how sad. |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2005-12-21 ch 5, | abuseOh, that's so sweet! Well, write more, okay? |
| whisperofinsanity 2005-12-20 ch 5, | abusei love this story and can't wait for more |
| Living In Chaos 2005-12-19 ch 5, | abusereally cute storyI love how Nathaniel didn't give up on her..he's so sweetupdate soon! |