Okay, so I'm not really good with reviews but I just wanted to say that your story keeps shocking the hell out of me, in a good way of course. Keep going.

dramatic and totally plausible, i like it.
it's not (very) cliched, and something about Maddie and Jaymes just...I dunno, attracts me to this story.

Have I mentioned before how much I like your writing?
I just like the way your writing has just the right stuff in it. I can't explain things well, so that's all I can say.

I just hope to see the ending to this someday, as it looks like you haven't updated in a long time, and it's been a year since someone last updated.

oh man, I know you haven't updated this in ages and probably wont, but a person can hope right? :P I just read the 7 chapters, and have completely fallen in love with the way you portrayed the pain, confusion, and love between the characters. Please please PLEASE update this! It really has potential, and it will kill me not finding out what happens next! :)

sick stuff. incredible writing, quite the story line i'm having itsy issues with how you portrayed the time passage in the earlier chapters with Jaymes at home, but overall, i be totally blown away. sweet sweet stuffkeep updating!

marvelous

awesome job. =) nicely written. update soon!

Nice last line. Keep going!

He's back. Not in the best of circumstances, what with the death of his mother, but he's back. And she's going to have to choose between him and Josh. I think I know who she wants/doesn't want and definitally doesn't want. I can't wait for the next update! Well done with this chapter.

Oh god! Poor Josh and Maddie... Hmm oww so he finally returned.. AA can't wait for more! Please update soon :D

This is such a strong chapter. Once again, you prove your amazing ability to write with such strong emotion and honesty.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I'll wait for as long as it takes.

josh is HOT. LOL. well, good chapter. update soon! =)

Keep writing.

So he just left? just like that? oh god I didn't expect that, but I liked it. I like Josh he seems cool and sweet- I wish Maddie will fall for Josh and forget Jaymes... but I'm guessing that's gonna be hard and I'm guessing as well that Jaymes will be back in time. :D good chapter

You are an amazing writer, I love your work, and I truly admire you.

So keep it up. As I said, you are AMAZING.

oh i like where this is going. im glad you made it over time, as much as i love cliche it always bothers me hot its over a short time span. good work hope to see more soon