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| haruku 2008-07-01 ch 7,  | abusedramatic and totally plausible, i like it. it's not (very) cliched, and something about Maddie and Jaymes just...I dunno, attracts me to this story. Have I mentioned before how much I like your writing? I just like the way your writing has just the right stuff in it. I can't explain things well, so that's all I can say. I just hope to see the ending to this someday, as it looks like you haven't updated in a long time, and it's been a year since someone last updated. |
| madpeach-x 2007-08-14 ch 7, | abuseoh man, I know you haven't updated this in ages and probably wont, but a person can hope right? :P I just read the 7 chapters, and have completely fallen in love with the way you portrayed the pain, confusion, and love between the characters. Please please PLEASE update this! It really has potential, and it will kill me not finding out what happens next! :) |
| roni 2005-12-24 ch 7, anon. | abusesick stuff. incredible writing, quite the story line i'm having itsy issues with how you portrayed the time passage in the earlier chapters with Jaymes at home, but overall, i be totally blown away. sweet sweet stuffkeep updating! |
| angelslead 2005-11-25 ch 7, anon. | abusemarvelous |
| miss-blackhair 2005-11-21 ch 7, | abuseawesome job. =) nicely written. update soon! |
| cbprice25 2005-11-20 ch 7, | abuseNice last line. Keep going! |
| Bob n Kazzi 2005-11-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseHe's back. Not in the best of circumstances, what with the death of his mother, but he's back. And she's going to have to choose between him and Josh. I think I know who she wants/doesn't want and definitally doesn't want. I can't wait for the next update! Well done with this chapter. |
| Perfect Bliss 2005-11-19 ch 7, | abuseOh god! Poor Josh and Maddie... Hmm oww so he finally returned.. AA can't wait for more! Please update soon :D |
| Pretty Girls Make Graves 2005-11-18 ch 7, | abuseThis is such a strong chapter. Once again, you prove your amazing ability to write with such strong emotion and honesty. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I'll wait for as long as it takes. |
| miss-blackhair 2005-11-07 ch 6, | abusejosh is HOT. LOL. well, good chapter. update soon! =) |
| cbprice25 2005-11-07 ch 6, | abuseKeep writing. |
| Perfect Bliss 2005-11-07 ch 6, | abuseSo he just left? just like that? oh god I didn't expect that, but I liked it. I like Josh he seems cool and sweet- I wish Maddie will fall for Josh and forget Jaymes... but I'm guessing that's gonna be hard and I'm guessing as well that Jaymes will be back in time. :D good chapter |
| Pretty Girls Make Graves 2005-11-07 ch 6, | abuseYou are an amazing writer, I love your work, and I truly admire you. So keep it up. As I said, you are AMAZING. |
| pinkfluffyoranges 2005-11-07 ch 6, | abuseoh i like where this is going. im glad you made it over time, as much as i love cliche it always bothers me hot its over a short time span. good work hope to see more soon |
| Bob n Kazzi 2005-11-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseJosh sounds gorgeous. I like him a lot, but I can see some tension is Jaymes comes back. Although Maddie better give him one hell of a glare for just abandoning her. Sort of. I'll stop now. |