I loved this short story. I liked how you had each paragraph have a meaning to it in bold letters. well done!

~Sorrow~

A wonderful story, Icatora, I really liked it. You merged the characters perfectly with the passings of vision and events it really kept the piece flowing smoothly. Great work.

- Abbreviations, Open Up My Eager Eyes

Oh. My God.

That is. Wow. I can't even think of any words to describe that. That is just beyond beautiful.