Hey cammy! Its been a while but i forgot this is another favorite of mine to! :)

Again, how dare u praise ME when YOU are awesome wawesome falawesome at writing! I give love to this, it holds lots of emotion, and the rhyming scheme works too. I find it really hard to write a rhyming poem without losing some of the emotion I try to put into it. It just sounds like a stupid boy trying to write emotional poems but they sound stupid cause he stretches the rhyming scheme and makes up words like faloople when I write(did that sentence make sense? let me check it again. Lol). But rock on chicette,*singing* "write that funky literature blondie" !!Loves!!

Your poetry rocks man.

Very nice work, the rhyming pattern seems a little random, but it is very good.