hmm... I feel stupid because I know this is very very simply but I can't undersatnd it... :(

A thinker's poem. Nice work.

~:Isabella May:~

Nifty. I kind of got the impression of people interrupting things differently.

WoW! i like it. Keep it up."Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance".

I don't even have the words. It's ineffable.

Just one thing: After "As freedom from me" there shouldn't be a period, but a comma. It sounds like a continuous poem more.

Up to you of course. You have your own poetic liscense... ^^lov ya!

cool play on the phrase... nice poem

I've missed you writing so much... It always takes these seemingly complicated issues we have in real life and breaks them down into the most sustinct idea.

I loved this.

Very interesting/cool poem, like another reviewer I had to read it twise to really understand it.

I have one question though, not specifically about the poem but about you. I checked your bio and it didnt say, whats your religion? I have heard that qoute in refrence to paganism/wicca followers and I was wondering if you were one. Have you heard of this before..

"Bind the Wiccan laws we mustIn perfect love and perfect trust.Live and let live,fairly take and fairly give."

theres more to it then that, but I dont remember it word for word because it is very long.

Nice work, it confused me a little before I read it again. Keep up the great writing.

This is beautiful. I think it's one of my favorites of yours.

Oh...wow...I can REALLY relate to this right now. This was beautiful, absolutely gorgeous, and it made perfect sense too. It was personal without leaving a bunch of annoying questions. Review me sometime if you'd like, and keep writing! Great poem.Heart, Cut