Reviews for Hallowed be thy name

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Tempre's Twilight 2008-09-23 ch 14,	abuseI liked this story. it made me smile and want to cry for him and laugh at him, but it was very sweet :)
PencilSketchS 2008-07-29 ch 14,	abusei thought i'd gotten it wrong about the story being complete, but i checked and it is. it seemed like the story would go on but that was actually a very nice place to leave it at. i really enjoyed Adrien's story.
aripie 2008-06-02 ch 14,	abuseI really loved this story and I am glad that it IS implied (in my hopeful opinion lol) that Donalee and Adrian will get together - I kinda dig them as a couple. :)
PindrakeCake 2008-04-12 ch 14,	abusewow that was one of the greatest stories i've ever read on here. period.
rebabe 2008-03-31 ch 14,	abusethis was really sad then it got good then it got sad again and now its not so depressing but this is a really good stary and no, i am not being a 'poopy face' (like my brother would say). i really mean it ^-^ well gotta go bye bye
SkyFallOuch 2008-02-21 ch 14,	abuseThis story is absolutely amazing! I kind of like the idea how not everything ends the way it should (especially that's what most stories consist of), and well...I just found it utterly brilliant. The last chapter with the last sentence, I'm not sure if I'm getting the right idea out of it, but I'm seeing as if you're implying something with Donalee and Adrian. Anyways, definitely going on my favorite list 'cause...for the last time, awesome story =)
True.Randomness 2008-02-09 ch 14,	abuseThe ending of this story brought tears to my eyes. Not because I found it was just unfair and cruel. I mean even though in the end it insinuated that the main character was no longer alone, it still didn't take away from the fact that he was used, betrayed, and was still being bullied at school. I am not one to be so grim about things but the fact the people that were now with him were the ones that had caused all his misery makes me thinks that if you have friends like that why need enemies. They may have made a mistake at acting how they did, and they may have been trying to make up for it, but Adrian's life was almost ruined by their immaturity. Maybe I am wrong but I can't help but find that in the end even though it suggested things were better, I would say that it didn't mean they weren't bad, which is very sad.
An Eccentric Caffeine Addic... 2008-01-03 ch 14,	abuseLovely to the very end. I really really liked it, it was adorable. :D However, you may want to look over your work a bit more as you do have spelling mistakes and some grammar stuff. It's not that huge but your writing would be a lot more professional if you edited it over before posting it. As for the story itself, I really liked the plot. Absolutely spectacular. I never liked Wes from the beginning (jackassjackassjackass) but Donalee was love. I understand that you want Adrian to forgive them (Wes and Derek) but I really don't like them...-cough- But awesome story nonetheless. I liked how you ended it. :)
An Eccentric Caffeine Addic... 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuse...-has fallen down dead while blushing like a fool- That was so awesome! I can't wait to read the rest but this first chapter was brain exploding GOOD! Gah, I love you. The idea of making a good little Christian boy gay, man how taboo. But a very ingenious idea indeed. I'll leave a more constructive review once I'm finished. :D
Roxifish 2007-12-30 ch 14,	abuseI really liked the way you made it sort of neutral, that Adrian didn't end up with anyone in the end. Well I was sort of expecting Wes' and Derek's relationship. But I can't help but hope that Wes really had genuine feelings for Adrian. That'd be nice. Anyway it's a really good story. Liked it alot. Thanks for that:D
X.xDramaQueen2010x.X 2007-10-21 ch 14,	abusei love this story but towards the end it totally got me fustrated with Adrian catching Wes and Derek kissing. But throughout the story I had my suspicions. I already had a feeling that Derek was gay, i also thought that either Derek had a thing for Adrian or he had a history with Wes, even though I was wishing that my assumption was wrong. But anyways the story was good.
Shiro.Kokoro 2007-10-05 ch 14,	abuseOkay, this story rocks. Amazingly wonderful. Like rocks a lot. It was sort of sad how Wes just sort of turned out to be a jerk, though. Sort of ruined my hopes of a happy ending lol. But it was still a wonderful story that is DEFINITELY going on my favorites list. Awesome story, despite the sad loss of Wes as an awesome guy ♥
Holy Trin 2007-09-02 ch 14,	abuseAs much as I loved this story I have to admit the ending really frustrated me. Adrian's just had his first major sexual experiance, one that made him feel dirty. Then just afterwards he finds out that he's been completely used by Wes and his reaction frankly is pretty apathatic. I mean I know you said he was angry and betrayed but not heartbroken, which I completely agree with, its not realistic to fall in love that quickly. But I think the betrayal of that much trust deserves alot more anger. Also not too keen on the forgival of Donalee either, although I guess it's hard to wrap things up in one chapter! I do love this though, especially Adrian! And Tyson! Xx
Selene noeturna 2007-09-01 ch 14,	abuseWah! I can't believe this is complete!! I liked it soo much. I wish Adrian found happiness somehow, maybe with Donalee since we all know he's gay too...and likes Adrian...
LandUnderWave 2007-08-31 ch 14,	abuseAw. makes cutesy noise Actually, ever since we met Donnalee I was hoping for him... This story is wonderful, and the characters happily multi-dimensional. (No 'Eragon'-style flatness here!) Thanks! Lilz

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