really exellent, its one of those that you read and can feel the narrators pain...i can relate

Traped in the 'acceptable' lifestyle of society? Me too.

It seems like you put a lot of thought into this poem, and I like it.

sometimes the greatest heros have the most sins tucked beneath their belts- fortunately we look past those for one good deed, or unfortunately...we absolve here and there ...i like it

hmm...6 bucks? interesting concept. simple yet powerful.

EB

I really liked the stuff about the high road, and sin, but overall it was really good...keep writing :) Luv, Aleara or Cut (two profiles here)

The last lines are hard-hitting.

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