|Reviews for Such a Pity: a Paradelle|
| beti213 8/22/05 . chapter 1
*grins from ear to ear*did you enjoy writing this?*smiles again* I love how these seem to fall into meaning, a revelation in themselves. this is absolutely gorgeous-I particularly like the way you change the punctuation so that the same combination and order of words means something entirely different; (ie. 3rd stanza, 1rst and 2nd lines) it breaks up the stagnancy that tends to plague these poems because of the repetition. I love the last stanza, especially. good stuff!