Wow Love, this was...well... - Dirty sounds so mean, but it was fantastic! Yes, this definetly deserves the M rating, but you did a great job! - Wonderful if I do say so myself...

HarlequinPlease fix me...

I'm finally reviewing! Sorry about that...and wow...O I wanna be a sex toy! haha I'm just kidding...maybe...

Wow... just kind of... wow... this song is too disturbing/erotic/dark to be really taken seriously, its just libral like to combine those genres , since its topic is sex, the ryhemes are extremly bland and guessable.

This is so... dirty _

I'm glad that you don't hold anything back in your writing. Because this is scarier than anything I could ever right.

o-O I was frightened to read this at first, now . . . I am officially scared of it, no matter how truthful and open it may be. "Ain't no complaints about my life" - Watch your double negatives! Or was that done on purpose?

Erm. . . . Well, it disgusted me, yet pleased my perverted mind. You made my yaoi-defined-week. n-n

**Yaoi - Japanese for "Gay" or something along those lines, which I totally support it! Go you! Though not the way you live. Change your lifestyle you dirty poiverted person. Though I do have some secrets of my own. . . . .

You're becoming very open and honest in your work! This was very different and I liked it, we all need to be a little crude sometimes.

ok then...

Lol...i really love it...hmm..i thought we were supposed to do a sex song together!...:(

wow...0.o