|Reviews for The Tale of Two People|
| CK Shorty 7/20/06 . chapter 4
Update soon! I'm really liking this story :o)!
| Losuai 5/30/06 . chapter 4
Aww, poor Theo. Nothing solves hangover except for not drinking so much in the first place...
Liked this chapter. Keep writing...
| Losuai 5/30/06 . chapter 3
Theo just likes to mess w/ people's minds doesn't she? The whore with a heart of gold! XD
| Losuai 5/29/06 . chapter 2
Crap! That is one hella of a twist. Very nice and descriptive. Keep going!
| Losuai 5/29/06 . chapter 1
Graphic yes. But not REALLy graphic. I like the characters and plot already...
Isn't Theo a boy name?
| SkepticCritic 5/13/06 . chapter 4
Ah...That's so sweet...He gets mad 'cuz she came even though he was sick...It's really cute...He's all caring and...and...sweet...and...I don't know...It's really cute though...
| CK Shorty 5/12/06 . chapter 3
Theo seems to be a strong woman, but confused and alone :/ I like her though! And Jeorge seems really shy, but that's ok too. Doesn't matter, I still like the story and characters anyway!
| CK Shorty 5/12/06 . chapter 2
I really liked the first chapter and I like this one also. This story is off to a good start :) Keep up the good work! So far, so really good!
| stanhops 2/23/06 . chapter 3
I find this story very interesting so far, and although the heroine is a whore, I love Theo and think he is terribly sweet. Update soon
| Skeptic-Critic 2/21/06 . chapter 3
I completly confused myself...Instead of going to chapter three I accidently pushed the next chapter button and reread chapter two...i'm terribly intelligent sometimes...But actually after rereading chapter two, I wanted to tell you that I really like your use of larger words...Just kinda had to say it...Everyone uses small, easy words now and it's nice to find an author who's not afraid to use a bigger vocabulary...
| punk-pwincess 2/14/06 . chapter 2
's the continuation?
| Skeptic-Critic 12/19/05 . chapter 2
he's cute when he decides to be heroic and chivalrous and all that...
| Skeptic-Critic 12/19/05 . chapter 1
lessen it? why?
| xAce 12/15/05 . chapter 1
Keep up the good work :)
| lindserly 9/29/05 . chapter 1
it was graphic but i really don't think it was TOO graphic.
it's an interesting, original idea and i'd keep reading for sure if you update.