i live in a factory town, and everyday i dream of the mountains... lol

this is a great poem. nice one!

CCAT! i havent commented in a long time but this poem kicks my ass! And by that I mean its amazing. Keep writing, plus if u stop I'll have nothing else to read since everyone else stopped already.

a beautiful and refreshing piece. the last line just makes me smile. lovely writing though, making this so personal and surreal yet giving it a day-to-day feel. lovely.

* noelle

I enjoy your subtle rhyme scheme. I always have a hard time with just out right ABA rhyme. Good work there. I like your metaphors. Well thought out. I like this poem. It speaks true.

xSiren's Bloodstone