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| TroubledCityGal 2006-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseHey Arutha...long time no talk...it's actually me Blu Bird (aka Stephanie) hmm...*gasp* you haven't written anything for a long time...boy get your head back in the game. I miss talking to you all the time. Tell me how everything's going just post to one of me or my friend's stupid writings at w.fictionpress.com/~shortygrump ...tons of hugs n kisses xoxoxox |
| Siriusly Evil 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abusewow this is shweet... your writing has become increasingly entertaining over the years =) |
| CostumeForAGutterball 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to say a huge Thanks for your review of Last Beautiful Girl...that gives me so much encouragement! Your stuff rocks! |
| idontknowwhoiamanymore 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseOk Daniel can I just tell you this is the best damned thing I've ever read of yours...and I don't mean that in a bad way, I mean it in a VERY good way :* |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abuseVERY GOOD as per usual. Beautiful vocabulary and description. Great job, I didn't find it that confusing. keep it up and check out my newest poem if you get a second :) thanks write on, -Em |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseIs very confusing. Like Vanilla sky, with dreaming things or not... Anyway, very descroptive. YOu must have thought a lot over the things you wrote, like 'To truly be human ... had only a hapless void.' You really thought that through. Or your just really smart or lucky. Good story! |
| Ethereal Kisses 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseHey, nice to hear from ya again ... Particularly love the bit about illusion, it's true: illusion is what forces us onward through this life. The idea is starkly original, at least to me, and the bit about the ash in his tears was inspired. Well done! ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ |
| Safekht 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm... very short but very detailed - a nice combination. It was very fascinating, to say the least of it. I didn't really see any grammar errors or anything, which, in my pathetic little pea-brain, you should get a 6 ft tall trophy for. Nice. |