This poem touches me in the deeps of my heart I feel this way about someone, and it was as if you read my mind.

Thank you kindly for your review. Not only does it get you brownie points, but I'll review you in turn as well! What fun.

This one strikes a chord with me. The one who means everything to you, who fills you with electricity just by being... and she's only there for your physical offerings. Well done, man.

One thing that bothers me is that doesn't read as poetry. It seems more like a conversation, prose or whatnot. I'm not sure how, but an edit to give it more flow would make it even better.

Wow. The change in the mood of the poem really tops it off. From true love to the despair of a love that is no more. Great poem, great poet.

Think not of the future. 'Tis wicked and a tricky mistress.

Actually, I'm not sure where that came from.

But, this is really nice. Sweet. Wish i could have felt this way.

i really like your written, very nicely done!!

Ah, worried about losing what you've worked hard to get. I get it now. I feel like I'm reading a series or something. I'm never usually one for a lot of poems all about a bunch of similar things but this is just so interesting and captivating.

I say drop the hints and see what she does. I am a girl so maybe that'll help (?). So yeah, anyway, I hope you'll be writing more poems soon because I'm really liking all of your poems so far!

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

Nice...I like it! oh and thank you for reviewing my work...

Hey mate, sorry 2 say but i can relate 2 this aswell...and liking a girl and not knowing how she feels sucks heaps but it is a life i suppose and that kinda sucks at times 2...this was really good tho, u got ur emotions out well. R&R me sometime ^_^-devil-apprentice-