the ending is creepy. it leaves you questioning, did he leave and the gun is a sign of contemplating suicide, or did "she" kill him...? nicely wordedthanks for the review for suffer the children. two new chapters up.

Simple but affective. I really think you should write songs. These would be great lyrics.

Catching last line "All I have left is this gun...". Amazing.

Ah, the withdrawal of love and sadness, slwoly sinking down maybe towards depression, etc...

Very powerful and I like the part where you completly focus it on the target of this poem's ex-lover.

the last line ties it together nicely.

Wow... that's... wow. Really emotional. And the ending- what a twist. I wasn't expecting it at all. Which is good, I suppose. It realy made me think. Very nice rhyming, quite subtle in places but it fit quite well- you have a good flow going. Anyway, good work, keep writing!

Drastic, but the emotions are so true...

Wow. The ending leaves you guessing. Great job.

wow...pretty good. very deep and puts the whole new meaning of lonely...very well written.

Sorrow

i love it its good expecially where you said all u have left is this gun r u planning to shote him/her who ever it is.?

Well hopefully you plan to use it on him. Otherwise, what kind of message are you sending. Lol. Well Done.

Solo.

I'm glad you left the ending implied... it makes the poem work much, much better.