|Reviews for Waiting Here|
| K. Silence 2/1/06 . chapter 1
the ending is creepy. it leaves you questioning, did he leave and the gun is a sign of contemplating suicide, or did "she" kill him...? nicely wordedthanks for the review for suffer the children. two new chapters up.
| tree plebian 1/28/06 . chapter 1
Simple but affective. I really think you should write songs. These would be great lyrics.
| backseats on thursdays 1/20/06 . chapter 1
Catching last line "All I have left is this gun...". Amazing.
| Talhiri Serrano 1/19/06 . chapter 1
Ah, the withdrawal of love and sadness, slwoly sinking down maybe towards depression, etc...
Very powerful and I like the part where you completly focus it on the target of this poem's ex-lover.
| chaos called creation 1/14/06 . chapter 1
the last line ties it together nicely.
| kit feral 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Wow... that's... wow. Really emotional. And the ending- what a twist. I wasn't expecting it at all. Which is good, I suppose. It realy made me think. Very nice rhyming, quite subtle in places but it fit quite well- you have a good flow going. Anyway, good work, keep writing!
| Teao Girl 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Drastic, but the emotions are so true...
| nanashi-04 11/18/05 . chapter 1
Wow. The ending leaves you guessing. Great job.
| Sorrowful Dreams 10/1/05 . chapter 1
wow...pretty good. very deep and puts the whole new meaning of lonely...very well written.
| grl wit many thoughts 9/17/05 . chapter 1
i love it its good expecially where you said all u have left is this gun r u planning to shote him/her who ever it is.?
| AlwaysAmberella 8/17/05 . chapter 1
Well hopefully you plan to use it on him. Otherwise, what kind of message are you sending. Lol. Well Done.
| ambiguityy 8/17/05 . chapter 1
I'm glad you left the ending implied... it makes the poem work much, much better.