THis is really, really great. Very sweet.

I love the "He's _ like that" "I'm _ like this" lines. They perfectly balance off the whole story. Your writing style is interesting and to-the-point, which maybe makes it interesting in the first place. I love the two characters and their dialogue.

That was really awesome. You wrote it in a very fluid, casual manner, and that was really good for the story. It was really sweet. Good job. :)

-marie

0_O it's het...and I liked it -dies-