Gosh I wish there was more to this... More to all of your stories actually.
They're just so brilliant.

Aw, very cute!

ok..that a cool story!!..i think you make a mistake here...
"He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon."..notice the Sir William name comes here but in fact it supposed to be Sir Benny..

anywho~~ Kinda slow at first of the starting and you in my opinion done a great job of picking up the pace and explaining the details in the end of the story..but its a pity its just a one shot..coz kinda wanted to know more about Harley life..i just think he is that cute and wizardy..LOL..and with a knight in the mix..just perfect!..

ok, so its been like 3 years, and still, i come back to this story every year. its affected me strongly. its one of my favorites. i love it. i cherish it. i wish it was a novel.
well, i just wanted to say,
HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND KEEP WRITING, YOURE GREAT AT IT.

It was cute and made me feel squishy!

But at the end you stated:

'He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon.'

I think you meant:

'He limply threw the reins back at Sir Benny and turned to find Hell Demon.'

Thank you for writing!

this is such a great story!
but a short one...
which i bet you could turn into a Great long story! it has so much and all the potential to be a chapter spender.
rereading it for about my 7th time since you posted it so long ago.

I really love this story. Some of your others are really great too, but this one...OH! I just come back and read it when I'm feeling really down or the day before I have to do something really unpleasant because it just gives me warm fuzzy feelings!

bipolar people are sexy. - .-

especially ukes OGC i don't know why i'm using that symbol. i think it's because i just watched a short flick trying to find the purpose for the whole in the female prerpuce thingy. or the thing under it. d.a.c. thing.

awesome!

Wow. Seriously amazing. I just want to read it again and again...the characters all seem really likeable, and I love the little details (like naming the pony Hell Demon)
I'm gonna go read it again.

Um. I'm favoriting for the sheer creativity and cuteness here. Gah! I'm going to read this ten more times now with my Cheshire cat expession.

another great one-shot. your imagination makes me so very jealous.
oh, and im going to review 'A Boy With Horns' here, too.
yeah, it was great. very imaginative. i wish you'd continue.
-kon

Brilliant as always:) I just dont' quite get what sir Benny meant at the end. . . unless that wasn't the end?

...Just... wow. I would've never thought that I would ever like that!!... So.. GOOD. -envy-...I absolutly ADORE it. :3

so much love! i like that no one was who you thought. all of them had secrets and those motivated their actions and decisions. i got images of clark kent on the scarecrow pole when i read this. it hurt to read that experience of harley's. i also like how benny changed over the course of the story. well, not changed. harley's view of him changed. and it was beautiful. ^_^