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Curb Crasher
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseIt was cute and made me feel squishy!

But at the end you stated:

'He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon.'

I think you meant:

'He limply threw the reins back at Sir Benny and turned to find Hell Demon.'

Thank you for writing!
spoonring
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abusethis is such a great story!
but a short one...
which i bet you could turn into a Great long story! it has so much and all the potential to be a chapter spender.
rereading it for about my 7th time since you posted it so long ago.
Seque Me ad Meum Somnium
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI really love this story. Some of your others are really great too, but this one...OH! I just come back and read it when I'm feeling really down or the day before I have to do something really unpleasant because it just gives me warm fuzzy feelings!
paputsza
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abusebipolar people are sexy. - .-

especially ukes OGC i don't know why i'm using that symbol. i think it's because i just watched a short flick trying to find the purpose for the whole in the female prerpuce thingy. or the thing under it. d.a.c. thing.
pirate-guy99
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseawesome!
December Topaz
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseWow. Seriously amazing. I just want to read it again and again...the characters all seem really likeable, and I love the little details (like naming the pony Hell Demon)
I'm gonna go read it again.
Lady E
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abuseUm. I'm favoriting for the sheer creativity and cuteness here. Gah! I'm going to read this ten more times now with my Cheshire cat expession.
The Aquatic Chewbacca
2007-04-08
ch 1,
abuseanother great one-shot. your imagination makes me so very jealous.
oh, and im going to review 'A Boy With Horns' here, too.
yeah, it was great. very imaginative. i wish you'd continue.
-kon
Lami
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant as always:) I just dont' quite get what sir Benny meant at the end. . . unless that wasn't the end?
Sakura
2006-06-22
ch 1, anon.
abuse...Just... wow. I would've never thought that I would ever like that!!... So.. GOOD. -envy-...I absolutly ADORE it. :3
newtypeshadow
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseso much love! i like that no one was who you thought. all of them had secrets and those motivated their actions and decisions. i got images of clark kent on the scarecrow pole when i read this. it hurt to read that experience of harley's. i also like how benny changed over the course of the story. well, not changed. harley's view of him changed. and it was beautiful. ^_^
GrayWings
2006-04-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH. My. GOD! That was so cute, beautiful, and just brilliant! And the kiss at the end... Ahh...All I don't like is that it is only one chapter, but oh, well! ^_^

Great Work!

~Gray Wings
Prisoner-11
2006-03-27
ch 1,
abuse*grin* But I don't understand what word he is breaking.
Spraypaint
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abuse-love on you-

This is gorgeous - nice description, nice setting, nice pace. Sure, in normal circumstances, I wouldn't be too enthusiastic about overly powerful Harley, but as it didn't feature too highly in the story it didn't bother me.

Yeah. So. Love it. ^^
Chainlinks
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved that! Wow, I'm actually kind of speechless. This is going on my favorites list.
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