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| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abusevery touching and quite the humble poem. Great way to have one by one described and then give us the example of your life...great work ~Sorrow~ |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, I ove how you expalin everything. Sad and beautiful at the same time. Kepe it up. |
| backseats on thursdays 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it.Everything you write, is shown through beautifully. Well done. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseYou have a style all your own in this. Freedom is love, and truth beauty. Juliet. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful. your descriptions for the four words were thought-provoking and heartfelt. take care and keep writing. EB |
| Infection 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abusei loved how you incorporated the title into the poem. |
| Extraho-Uxor 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abusevery different. I dont really see any other parallel to moulin rouge besides the name though. I didn't get the overall feel of the poem, there wasn't an atmosphere to really grasp. nice though |