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| Shadow of Oblivion013 2005-11-13 ch 1,   | i agree. this is your best. i like this poem. the rhyming was good, and it flowed nicely. it's hard to say i enjoyed this, b/c topics like this aren't supposed to be enjoyed. oh well. :) splendid job. k/w in memory,~shadow |
| Me 2005-08-25 ch 1, | So I"ve already told you what I think of this one but I thought I would review it anyway. It is well written, of course like I said before I can't tell you that I enjoy it... because it is difficult to enjoy such topics... but then... I guess people can't enjoy a lot of my poems either tahn.. for the same reason... *hugs* Love,Liz |
| rubbadukleeng 2005-08-18 ch 1, | i do believe that this poem is really your best! it is really good, its short, but its all that it needs really. i like it! angel |
| breezy nostrils 2005-08-17 ch 1, | Sad, but interesting twist at the end. Nice work...keep going! |