|Reviews for One Step Forward|
| Orion Demasecus 12/8/05 . chapter 1
Man does that ever suck. I hate bad luck, especially when you end up dead...of course that hasn't happened to me but...whatever, nice poem.
| multiples of six 10/23/05 . chapter 1
Interesting.. it's so short, but makes its point.. I can't figure out how exactly she died, but hey )
| fading zero 8/27/05 . chapter 1
i like this one
shattering glass illusions
| Suicidal Skies 8/21/05 . chapter 1
Hehe, this is awesome.
Makes me think of a cliff and hesitations. Divine.
| Thorn's-girl 8/17/05 . chapter 1
Short, bitter, and good. I like it.